Don't gravitate away, he says.
Smooth it over with your
sweet talk, your savvy
harmonica skills.
Actually, what works best
is a word, a thought--
any indication that
what we have here is more
than a thistle
Then a saxophone wails
like a cavity entering a tooth:
slowly at first, then echoing,
empty as a cave.
Really love that last stanza and the "wails/like a cavity".. brilliant.
ReplyDeleteFar better than the garbage I wrote for this prompt.